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Attention ... Attention ... River Police Alarm ... Please stand back from that map ... we have to use the eraser!
- The river that springs in the Grands Rocs flowing eastward, changes direction to flow
southward between two mountains, despite the fact that eastward is more plain terrain.
= Will probably add a moutain to make it legit
- The same river divides east of Heles (R. d. Larven). That's very questionable
= I read that some people here say river never split but only join. thogh I read some articles that show clearly that rivers do split.
- The lake west of La Sentinelle flows northwards to Cargild. The junction should bow to west instead east.
= Can easily fix it....but why?
- The lake south of La Vigilante - where does he come from, where does he go.
= That's a water zone produced by te existence of an underworld area (Un-An-Sif) that also makes the lake above boils
I see that there could be minor rivers, that are not drawn, but it would look better if there's a river to
feed the lake and to flow to the bay northwest of Vigilante or into the stream flowing westwards through Terres de Gorjas.
= I didn't plan to draw more rivers (even minor) but maybe I'll add some!
- The river dividing at Dinral is questionable. I would let it flow only southwestward to the bay.
= Probably true
- There are many vast lands without rivers. I guess there are many minor rivers, that are not drawn.
But if you ask me, this map would be even more awsome and mind boggling, if you draw minor rivers, too.
It would explain the location of many settlements, beeing located in 'nowhere'.
= see answer above!
- The rivers have no names. that's a real bummer, because rivernames are allways the oldest and best known names.
Rivers are as old as montains, but there is no other thing, at wich lives as much people as at a river. So names of rivers
are very old and known to millions of people. I would find it important to name them all.
= Hah, that was my last step, I did add all rivers names
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- There is that bridge between R. d. Naal and Senerin. How long is that bridge.
- That question leads me to the question of scale. I couldn't find one. Would be nice to have. Will it be in the down right box?
= Yes there will a scale inthe bottom right box
- There are so nice little woods in Marches D'Eldor. It would be nice to have more of them all over the map.
= You're right
Sorry, there are quite a few points. Feel free to work with them.
In the end I have to say that your map is stunningly great. The montains, the settlements, the graphics in the box up left ... wow!!!
It all looks very very nice. I definitely like your style.